The Doctor
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Registration date : 2007-04-15
 | Subject: Poems  Sun Apr 15, 2007 10:19 pm | |
| I like to write poems and have recieved lots of positive feedback from many people and have lots of fans.
Wanting to widen my range I have decided to post a poem here, which is one of my favourites and is based on a quote from a certain TV Show.
This is an original poem. Something
Something is moving in the darkness,
It's black heart beats slowly.
All die beneath it's shadow,
None may survive.
Something is disturbing the dead,
It's chaotic screams eat all.
Even the shadows die,
None may thrive.
Something is watching you, From the shadows.
It's eyes pore over you,
Here, you die.
Nick Chambers 2007
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Bethany
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| | Subject: Re: Poems Sun Apr 15, 2007 10:27 pm | |
| Oooh I like this one Mr Chambers! Lovely and morbid as usual  | |
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Lucy
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| | Subject: Re: Poems Mon Apr 16, 2007 7:49 pm | |
| Another Classic from Chambre! How dooooooo you do it? | |
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hazelnut
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Sammah
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| | Subject: Re: Poems Wed Apr 18, 2007 8:58 pm | |
| its a great poem nick i mean doctor!
can you try and do something less depressing, like a happy poem?? lol | |
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Lucy
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| | Subject: Re: Poems Wed Apr 18, 2007 10:45 pm | |
| Nick... you need to cheer up! Still the rhymes and stuff sound cool and it works really well. One of your best methinks! | |
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love the poetry nick! write something more cheerful for me some time! lol